My co director and I presented our film to the class and we received feedback regarding strengths and areas of improvement. Our audience enjoyed the camera quality, camera technique, the acting, and the story line. A suggestion to improve the film was to shorten the length of the intro scene because it ran a little long considering it's only a two minute film. Other areas of improvement included clarifying the role of the mother. Our actor Kelli looks young and her role could be mistaken as being the friend instead of the mother since it's never explicitly stated.
As of now we plan to make the mother look older by adding wrinkles with makeup and gray streaks in her hair. We also plan to cut down on the amount of pans in the intro scene to make the opening shorter. We will also edit the audio in the film to make the voices and dialogue more audible and clear for the audience.
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